Twisted Fairy Tale Retelling- 1st grade writing assignment

Big Bad Riding Hood

by Elijah 

LIttle Red Riding Wolf's mom sent Little Red to Grandma's house to bring her a basket of meat. She was sick.

Little Red went into the woods. After she was in the thick part of the woods, Little Red met a woman. 

The woman asked, "Where are you going?"

"To my grandma's house," she replied. 

"Where does she live?" the woman asked.

"Near the bridge," she replied.

Hmmm...the woman thought. I'm kind of hungry, she thought. Then, the woman saw some flowers.

"Surely your Grandma would like some of those flowers," she said.

"Yes," said Little Red.

While Little Red picked Flowers, the woman ran to Grandma's house.

Little Red got back on the path.

Then the woman saw Grandma's house. She ran towards it, and then knocked. A weak voice called out "Who is it?"

Yes, it's the right house, thought the woman.

"It is Little Red Riding Wolf," the woman replied.

"Come in," the Grandma called.

Then the woman ran in and ate the Grandma all up. She jumped into Grandma's clothes and into her bed.

Not long after that, Little Red came. She was surprised to see that the door was open. Then she knocked.

"Who is it?" the woman called in he weakest voice.

"Little Red Riding Wolf," said Little Red.

"Come in," the woman said. 

Little Red went in. Little Red did not recognize her Grandma.

"Grandma, what small eyes you have."

"The cold."

"Grandma, what small ears you have."

"The cold."

Grandma, what small teeth you have."

"To eat you with!"

And she ate her all up.

She was tired.  She went to bed.  A wolf came and heard the weird snoring and he went in. It was a shocking sight! It wasn't Grandma! In fact, it wasn't a wolf! A woman was in Grandma's place!

The wolf bit her open! Out jumped Little Red and Grandma! Little Red gave Grandma the basket. They ate and lived happily ever after.